Essay Sentences Examples

General

  • Some people prefer ( not to attend a live sporting or music event in person ), instead ( watching at home on a TV or computer )

Paraphrase

Thesis

Question typeThesis Statement
Advantages and disadvantagesAlthough there are good reasons to do so, those advantages are largely outweighed by the disadvantages.

Topic Sentences

Topic Sentence OneTopic Sentence Two
( Watching a performance ) without having to ( leave the house is ) undoubtedly convenient; time saved on traveling to a sports stadium or gig venue can be time well spent doing other things.The sensation of a live event, however, is incomparable

Conclusions

  • To conclude, while there are some upsides to viewing from home, the experience of being there in person simply cannot be matched. People should make an effort, where they can, to do so. 

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