General
- Some people prefer ( not to attend a live sporting or music event in person ), instead ( watching at home on a TV or computer )
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Thesis
| Question type | Thesis Statement | |
|---|---|---|
| Advantages and disadvantages | Although there are good reasons to do so, those advantages are largely outweighed by the disadvantages. | |
Topic Sentences
| Topic Sentence One | Topic Sentence Two |
|---|---|
| ( Watching a performance ) without having to ( leave the house is ) undoubtedly convenient; time saved on traveling to a sports stadium or gig venue can be time well spent doing other things. | The sensation of a live event, however, is incomparable |
Conclusions
- To conclude, while there are some upsides to viewing from home, the experience of being there in person simply cannot be matched. People should make an effort, where they can, to do so.